Metaphor Poem Lochie

Over the past two weeks Room 7 have been learning how to write effective metaphors. A metaphor is a direct comparison to an object/thing.

We had to describe as lolly, a tree, vehicle, something in our community, a sandwich and a piece of clothing.

Here is mine.
Lochie is a chocolate eating lots.

Lochie is a Evo always on track.

Lochie is a Pine tree tall and strong.

Lochie is a steak sandwich.

Lochie is a mighty force on the rugby field.